lake Can Somebody please help me annotate this poem please...?

What's throwing you off is your line breaks. I do this all the time too. Read this to yourself outloud and you'll be able to see them. I don't think that "easy weight" fits. It's kind of odd and sticks out, reads a bit funny. I think your trying to say effortless or something. Show don't tell. Also, the part about mystery s is very ambigious and has a certain connotation to it. I don't know if its in the literal sense or a metaphor for something, or even what it is a metaphor for , for that matter.there